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I see what you wrote 👍. It’s understandable, but the punctuation and structure need improvement to look professional and fluent. Here’s your original text, cleaned up for punctuation and flow:
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Original (your version):
"I have done my BS in English literature, now after this, I want to start other journey; so I'm just looking to you–growth base companies. I personally believe; if opportunities given by you, so this Zee generation will change a lot."
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âś… Corrected Version (punctuation + grammar):
"I have completed my BS in English Literature, and now I want to begin a new journey. I am looking towards growth-based companies like yours. I strongly believe that if opportunities are given, this Generation Z can bring significant change."
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✨ Key Fixes:
Split long sentences into shorter, clear ones.
Changed "other journey" → "a new journey" (sounds more natural).
Corrected "growth base companies" → "growth-based companies."
Smoothed "if opportunities given by you" → "if opportunities are given."
Made "Zee generation" → "Generation Z" (standard usage).
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Do you want me to make it formal (for job applications) or inspirational (for motivational statements/LinkedIn posts)?
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